Nice Harry I like how you said you stand tall with somebody. I also like the sentence when you said you are shoes and are ready for running. Another cool sentence was you are a tree shooting up with ideas your growing and thinking. I could connect to this writting when I said in mine that I am the twin towers and I also said that I am a cheese burger going crazy!
Harry, This is a awesome peice of writing! ��I love the line when you say "I am a Toyota because I call our too ora groups toyota groups every metre I go I get a idea." This is a awesome way to show you are good at learning. Keep writing.Lily